On the Earnslaw
In the exciting holidays I went on a boat named the Earnslaw to a stinky farm. The farm had greedy cows, wooly sheep, obedient sheep dogs, christmas deers and humungous lamas. The Earnslaw runs on coal and it smelt pungent. I saw the sheep dogs stressfully round up the scared sheep. I felt delighted that the sheep did not get cut by the sheering.
By Will Kuegler
The detail you have put in your recount makes it very enjoyable to read. Sounds like you had a great adventure in Queenstown. Nicola
ReplyDeleteFantastic writing Will, you sure had a fantastic day with Grannie and Grandad. Thanks for the wool you bought home. Mum x
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