Faster he told himself or I will get caught. He loaded more apples into his cart. Greedy the rat, he told himself, that's all I need. Suddenly a cat saw a fat rat. Greedy shot off swiftly on his horse and cart. Oh no the horses broke free. What shall I do? Thought Greedy. Pop! He was thrown with his apples into his hole and he had a feast.
By George Jones
Wow George, what great writing. You did a great job explaining the thinking of a rat on the run! Keep up the engaging writing.
ReplyDelete:) Courtney